This book is an erotic novella, and features content that is not suitable for readers under the age of 18.
If you are not 18 or older, please do not continue to read this review and do not purchase the book.
☾ about the book
Title: Poolside Punishment
Author: Harley Laroux
Format: ebook, novella
Smut Rating: 🌶️🌶️
Trigger Warning: ADULT CONTENT, for an extensive list, click here
☾ the synopsis
When bratty Lola and her Daddy Dom Austin go to visit their friends in California, Lola just wants to lounge by the pool, get tipsy, and play with her beautiful friend Victoria. The last thing she wants is to have Daddy intruding on her fun with orders and rules – then Austin’s friend Marcus starts giving her orders too! A bratty submissive surely shouldn’t have to obey her Daddy on vacation…right?
But there are consequences for disobedience, and Austin is a strict disciplinarian. He takes Lola over his knee for a hard paddling, while Marcus and Victoria watch. No matter how much bratty Lola begs and struggles, Austin makes sure she’s spanked until she’s very sorry, and completely humiliated. Disobeying in front of Daddy’s friends carries extra punishment too, when Austin gives Marcus permission to spank Lola next! The only hope Lola has of seeing her punishment come to an end is to pleasure Victoria with her mouth, bringing the woman to orgasm as she’s spanked by Marcus.
Red-bottomed and repentant, Lola is then allowed to pleasure the two Dominant men, spit-roasted from both ends – her sore bottom pounded as her mouth is filled and used. Disobedience has consequences – but not all of them are bad!
☾ the characters
Two brats, and two dominants, there is not really a lot more to say about them.
☾ the world building
This story is set at a poolhouse in California.
☾ what i liked about this book
I can’t pinpoint anything specific, however, if you are into group sex and sub-sharing, you will definitely enjoy this
☾ what i disliked about this book
I found Lola to be an extremely annoying character.
If you needed a person to be the definition of brat, Lola would be it.
☾ should you read this book?
If you are into the kinks listed in the content warnings and you are also craving a sexy afternoon at the pool, yes.
If you’re looking for a very good erotic novella, then no.